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Oct 11

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Subject: A Few Changes Before Your Presentation

Hi Evan,

Your presentation has a clear main idea, and the examples make the topic easy to understand. Before Thursday, please shorten the text on slides four and five.

Right now, the audience may spend more time reading than listening to you. Keep the main points on the slides and explain the details aloud.

Also, practice your ending. It stops suddenly after the last example. Add a brief closing statement that connects back to your main idea.

You have a strong draft. These changes will help your audience follow it.

Ms. Patel

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